Currently,XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate
the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result ,
your dreams willcome true . On the contrary, if you ( 3 ).
Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that ( 4 ) .You donn"t have to
look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (5 )
It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6 ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think ( 7 ).
注解：
1 ： XX的第一個優點
2： 支持XX的做法
3：不支持XX的做法
4：XX的第二個優點
5：舉例證明優點二
6：說明XX優點三的影響第三天我寫的相應作文：
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day .
This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable
than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one"s abilities ).
If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties ), as a result , your dreams willcome true .On the contrary,
if you ( have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through .
No one can deny another fact that (self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .
You donn"t have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know (the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound
influence upon ( the achievement of one"s ambitions ).
With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will).