My Dream
Everyone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too. When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Imogen in future. However, I knew very well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.
After graduating from, college, I found a job as a teacher. Although I was very busy with teaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I made experiments to practise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was so deeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time. Now I have made great progress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy. The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.
本文點擊
本文為一篇記敘文。文中第一段為夾敘夾議，以general comment開頭，引出“我的夢想”。第二段為作者為實現夢想所做的努力和取得的成果，最後一句“成為科學家的階梯還遙遙在上，但我至少已攀登了第一級。”既是總結又是方向。此句摹仿了Jack London 的散文“What Life Means to Me”中的一句精彩
句子。