My View On Private Tutoring(家教之我見)
1.家教與日俱增;
2.家教的優缺點;
3.我的看法。
[寫作導航]第一段可先圍繞提綱開始，然後引出家教也有優缺點;第二段主要圍繞優點來寫，可從對家長、對從事家教的大學生以及對孩子本人等幾方面來談;第三段談缺點，可從孩子的娛樂、從事家教的大學生的學習等方面來談;第四段談我的看法，弊大于利。
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Nowadays, an increasing numbers of parents ask college students to act as private tutors to their kids. Like everything else, private tutoring also has advantages and disadvantages. Generally speaking, the advantages can be listed as follows.
First, private tutoring is helpful to the parents. Many parents are so busy with their work that they have no time to help their children with their lessons. Besides, private tutoring is good for the tutors themselves. They can make some money while providing a service for others. Most important of all, private tutoring is beneficial for kids. Since the parents can't help when the kids have problems, private tutoring seems to be a wise choice.
However, private tutoring also has disadvantages. To begin with, it takes so much of the kid's time that they can hardly find time for rest and amusement, which is harmful to their health. To make matters worse, some tutors have too many kids to teach so that they neglect their studies at school. Worst of ail, some tutors only offer tips for test taking rather than teaching kids what is really needed.
According to the above analysis, it is clear that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. Therefore, it is proposed that great emphasis be laid on the stimulation of the kid' s learning and the cultivation of their potential Moreover, kids should be given more time to play so that a new and healthy generation will emerge.