2003年9月全國大學英語四級考試作文範文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.簡單敘述一下這位同學生病(或受傷)的情況 2.同學、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的 3.人與人之間的這 種相互關愛給我的感受是……
範文：
During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, Li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital. The news spread quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too. However, through our government"s publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try out best to help her. Some teachers provided darly necessities while some students recorded the English class contents for him so that Li ming could not be left behind. With our care and concern, Li ming recovered quickly. Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes, "the world will turn itto heaven only if everyone contributes a little." and I do believe that it"s my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!
點評：本文切題，論證豐富生動，表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好。基本上無大的語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。