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縮寫:一封奇怪的“信”-A Strange “Letter”

一封奇怪的“信”

【內容提示】

下面是一篇非常有趣的記敘文,請你閱讀後回答後面的問題。問題的答案要連成一篇不超過80個詞的文章。如果問題後面的括弧裏有用斜體字標明的特殊要求,請按要求寫句子。

A Strange “Letter”

My neighbour"s children love playing hide-and-seek (捉迷藏) as all children do, but no one expected that a game they played last week would be reported in the local newspaper (地方報紙)。

One afternoon, they were playing in the street just outside the postoffice. Young Lan, who is only five years old, found the perfect place to hide. His sister, Janet, had shut her eyes and was counting up to ten when Lan noticed that the small metal (金屬的) door of the letter-box had been left open. The postman had just taken all the letters out and had gone into the post-office to see if there were any parcels (包裹).Lan climbed into the letter-box and pulled the door from the inside so hard that it locked. Soon realizing what he had done, he became very frightened and started crying. Meanwhile, Janet was looking for him everywhere but could not find him. It was lucky (幸運的) she happened to stop outside the letter-box and hear her brother"s cries. She immediately ran to tell the postman who hurried out to unlock (開鎖) the metal door. Lan was now free, but he had had such a bad fright (驚嚇) that he could not stop crying. The postman, however, soon found a way of making him laugh again. He told him that next time he wanted to hide in a letter-box, he should remember to stick a stamp on himself!

Questions

1.What were my neighbour"s children playing outside the post-office one afternoon?

2.Had the letter-box been left open or not? Where did young Lan climb? Did he lock himself in or not? (Finding that) (and)

3.When did his sister, Janet, realize where he was hiding? What did she do? (so)

4.How did the postman make Lan stop crying after he had let him out?(After letting…by telling)

【作文示範】

A Strange Letter

One afternoon my meighbour"s children were playing hide-and-seek outside the post-office. Finding that the letter-box had been left open, young Lan climbed into it and locked himself in. His sister, Janet, realized where he was hiding when she heard his cries so she ran to tell the postman. After letting him out, the postman made Lan stop crying by telling him that next time he wanted to hide in a letter-box he should remember to stick a stamp on himself. (80 words)

【寫法指要】

原文問題後的括弧內容要求縮寫的文章中有一個“Finding that”開頭的現在分詞短語結構和兩個“After letting… by telling”的介詞+動名詞的短語結構。在寫這兩種結構的句子時要註意結構中的邏輯主語要與主句的主語一致,否則就會造成修辭上的錯句懸垂修飾語,如把“After letting”結構寫成“After letting him out, Lan was made to stop crying…”,前半部分就是懸垂修飾語,因為letting的主語不是Lan,而是postman。

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