論贊揚(on praise)
1、人們都喜歡贊揚;
2、但人們卻很少得到贊揚;
3、我們應該……
[範文]
everyone wants to be appreciated and praised by others for what they do and what they say. for instance, children want to be praised by their parents. students want to be praised by their teachers. employees want to be praised by their employers. it seems that praise is like sunlight to us, we can"t flower and grow without it.
but it is a pity that while most of us are only too ready to blow the cold wind of harsh criticism on others, we are somehow reluctant to give people around us the warm sunshine of praise. for example, most mothers are always not satisfied with the progress their children made at school most teachers always drown their students compositions in critical red ink, instead of commenting favorably on them. most employersarealways criticalabout what their employees have done instead of giving encouragement to them. produces may be great. so, let"s be alert to the small excellence around us and comment on them. we will not only bring joy into other people"s lives, but also, very often, add happiness to our own.
[作文評論]
文章一開始的主題句應點明主題，接著套用具體例子支持，即無論是誰，比如孩子、學生、僱員都希望得到贊揚。該段的結尾句可用一個優美的比喻：贊揚猶如陽光，有了它，萬物才能茁壯成長;第二段分析現狀，可通過舉例說明人們在日常生活中不但不贊揚，反而常批評的做法;最後一段指出贊揚別人並非很難，隻要用心去發現，努力去贊揚發生在生活中的值得贊揚的事，一個精彩的世界就會呈現在你我的面前。