Starry Starry Night
Everything on the canvas is flowing, enthusiastic, lively and violent: the sky was occupied with swirling clouds in violet haze and dotted with tens of thousands of flaming stars that brightly blazed in gorgeous gold. A huge cypress cut the subtle flowing of clouds in silence, brown and stretched, bringing a unique elegance of balance to the whole painting. Few clumsy cabins scattered in the open field, strangely in harmony with the turbulently flowing sky. Hazily, the shadows on the hills outlined the turquoise trees and amber grains, bathed in dim moonlight.
Generally, the perfect artworks born under Vincent van Gogh's hand annotated a new meaning of harmony. Its pureness was based on its complexity, its grace reflected by its clumsiness, its plainness embodied in its glory, its tempestuous flowing leading to a sense of solidity. Marvelous!
Starry Starry Night, a magnificent masterpiece, surely and absolutely.
簡評
本文以優美的語言描寫了梵穀的名畫——Starry Starry Night，表現了作者良好的語言表達能力和一定的藝術鑒賞水準。作者為我們展開了一幅畫卷，文章的第一句話點明了整幅畫的特點：Everythlne on the canvas is flowine。天空中布滿了紫色的雲彩和金色的閃爍星星。一棵巨大的樹將浮動的雲一分為二，使整個畫面處于平衡狀態。空地上分散的幾間小屋與浮雲流動的天空保持著奇怪的和諧。山坡上的影子勾勒出青蔥的樹木，琥珀色的谷物沐浴在月光下。
作者為我們揭示了這幅畫的主題：自然界中萬物的和諧——簡單基于復雜，粗俗中體現著優雅，輝煌中可見平淡，騷動不安皆歸于平靜。讀罷此文，不但猶如親眼欣賞了藝術大師的名作，而且體會了其中蘊涵的哲學思想。
美中不足的是全文時態不盡統時，最好全部用一般現在時態。在描寫景色、人物或畫像