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Listening to the CD you sent to me "the solo piano",which is my favorite style of music there is something painful to soak into my body, little by little. The feeling is one thing named "loneliness", from a worn heart on a distant land. The heart is yours.

Without doubt, you are really a special friend of mine. We lived and learned love. We raced the sea and challenged the sky.From you I learned what it meant to laugh as well as cry, and I learned how to give as well as how to take.

Before I met you, I thought the sky was gray. I was a high achiever, but no matter how hard I worked, how many times I attempted, there was still a strong force which constrained me.So I was sensitive to everything around me. I really tasted the flavor of "loneliness." But you pulled me out. I still remember that night Snow was descending deep in places that looked shadow and covered up all kinds of filthy things You came up to me who was weeping and gave me a piece of paper, which It"s easy in everyday life.

To be caught up in webs of nonexistent problems,

Worries with not enough space to prove themselves.

Depressions with no meaning.

All these forces working together.

Gaining more and more power by pushing you

Further back into yourself.

Until it"s self pity.

Life is against you.

Everything is wrong.

Then bitterness.

The world is at fault, you begin to hate

Then it"s over without having ever existed.

Life is beautiful.

You are beautiful

The world is yours

Cry tears of joy.

How could something so right ever be wrong?

But turn and look again.

You will be running for the rest of your life,

Trying to escape the reality of mood.

And the human mind...

You said to me with a temperate voice:"Hear the song of the bird? In spite of the snow and the wet and the coldness and the loneliness, the bird is singing. It believes that it can fly to

I beamed, only for your word. Henceforth, I didn"t feel lonely, because of you. Now I want to give you the poem you"ve given me and tell you: You won"t feel lonely because of me."

We don"t fear the punishment of life;we just can"t suffer the days without communication and love. We"ve dreamed of the serene life.

The dawn had just broken above the distant horizon and the pure silver light of morning flooded the field. We were treated to a brilliant display of rounded hill, dotted with sheep. Wild blue berries grew along the path home. Everything was in bloom. We rode on a swan boat or just sat in the sun; we were not afraid of the coming rainstorm, because we soaked our psyche in the sunshine and we were sure that we could recover and rebuild the beauty after the tempest.

So you must be sturdy. You are capable of coping with any difficulty. Please feel in touch with the world out of your window. You can smell my breath in the fresh air. You can see my childlike smile through the sunshine. You can hear my mild calling from the song of a lovely bird.

Remember: keep a beautiful mind. I will pray for you everyday, and my heart will go with you wherever you are.

簡 評

世界上什麽最珍貴?人與人之間的溫情、友情和愛情總能戰勝一切黑暗和煩惱——正如作者在心情灰暗、寂寞孤獨的時候,一首溫情的小詩給她帶來了光明,帶來了希望,讓她體會到隻要有感情的存在,一切都是可以戰勝的。

本文以第一、第二人稱寫作,給人印象深刻。另外作為心情感言,作者在描寫心情時婉婉道來,用詞典雅,如:“Before I met you,I thought the sky was gray...How many times I attempted,there was still a strong force which constrained me...I really tasted the flavor of‘loneliness.’”等。

溫馨的文筆,感人的描述使本文值得一讀。

(點評教師:張雪波)

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