The Traditional Culture Will Never Be Lost
The information revolution, the development of mass media and the achievements in science and technology have doubtlessly ushered us in a rapidly progressing society, where we may have no time to talk about our traditional culture. In the city, no one can escape from the fast pace. We eat the popularized fast food and enjoy the popularized "fast food" culture. Since we get so used to such fast things that many traditional things have been neglected, some people believe that the traditional culture will gradually be lost, but I think it will never be lost.
Although entertainments are in abundance nowadays, traditional cultures still continue to dominate. We still regard going to a concert as a luxury. Many classic books touch a string from generation to generation in spite of time and space. And we are still moved by the inspirational spirits of our great ancestors.Traditional festivals remind us of our disposition to the traditional culture. Our relief in traditional culture gets ready to revive at any time.
To some traditional cultures that are on decline, we have taken active measures to conserve them. Experts have come up with proper advice on protecting such cultures. Many volunteers have dedicated themselves to studying them. First and foremost,more and more people have discerned the importance of the traditional culture. Therefore, we are sure that our efforts will lead to a brilliant future.
If a culture wants to gain an eternal life, it should change itself to cater to the people in its age. So does our traditional culture. Traditional cultures adhering to modern means appear rigorous. For example, we make CDs for classic music so that it can not only meet modern needs but also spread further and more successfully in the modern world. The appearance of traditional culture changes, but the essence will never change and will be well accepted.
There is no need to worry about whether our traditional culture will be lost. It is an important heritage of the whole human race. No culture, no mankind. We cherish the traditional culture as we cherish our blood in our body. The traditional culture lies in life, forever continuing.
簡 評
信息厚炸，科技革命，快餐文化……人們身不由己，無暇他顧。這些無疑會引發人們對傳統文化的擔憂。作者針對這一現象斬釘截鐵地提出自己的論點：傳統文化不會消亡。然後作者運用了生活中許多為人們所熟知的例子，以及一些良好的排比句式，分段逐層推進，列舉、討論了人們對待傳統文化中不同內容的態度和做法，並展望了前景，從而較好地完成了論證的任務。
全文思維活躍，條理井然，可見作者是位細心之人，有一個善于思考的頭腦和一顆善感的心。隻是在有些語句的表達上還可進行雕琢，以免艱澀難懂。
(點評教師：時麗娜)