How Does Technology Influence Our Lives?-科技如何影響我們的生活?
How Does Technology Influence Our Lives?
Whether one is willing or not, he can not deny that endless innovations of technology are constantly changing our lives. Appatently, not everyone is optimistic about the trend, but there are unquestionable positive aspects of it.
To the senior in the society, health and security are the most concerned issues. Today, thanks to the growing process in medicine field, the life span and quality have been greatly enhanced. Old people are becoming increasingly energetic and rigorous. Besides, technology also ensures the security of those old people who live separately from their offspring gimmicks such as auto-alarming bell free them from the worries about possible gas release or theft.
To the young, the startling advances in application technology enable them to work and live more comfortably. Automation the computer-controlled system, along with assembly lines and robots not only cuts down the prices by mass production,but also frees people from dangerous and tiring working conditions. After work, benefiting from all the conveniences provided by such handy appliances as microwave ovens, washing machines, or automobiles, people enjoy a lot more leisure time and feel more relaxed.
As to children, they benefit most from the boom of information technology. For decades, computers and communication systems processed information only for selected audiences. Now,the development of technology makes everyone, including children, to get cheap information. Exposed to this from the early age, today"s children learn by trial and error how to collect and process information into useful knowledge at a fast pace. What"s more, through Internet and telecommunication, the children are closely connected with the outside world and are likely to be more competitive and creative than their older generations.
It might be because new technology is booming out at such a fantastic speed that many people aren"t feeling at ease with it.However, it does aim at making our lives more convenient and comfortable. My opinion is that wait indulgently for technology to perfect itself, try it voluntarily, and the world is certain to be much better than ever.
簡 評
本文運用分類法闡明科技提高生活質量這一主題。作者相當巧妙地按照年齡分類，介紹令各個年齡層次受益最深的各項科技成果，條理明晰，信息豐富，表達流暢，可算是同主題作文中相當好的一篇。
文章篇幅不長，卻概括了不同科技對不同年齡階層的巨大影響和人們行為方式和精神面貌的變化，可謂言簡意賅。這是由于本文作者語言風格緊湊，並較好地掌握了內容要具體，用詞要明確的寫作原則：如“technology also ensures thesecurity Of those old people who live separately from their offspring—gimmicks such as auto-alarmlng bell free them from the worries about possible gas—release or theft.”一句既是概述：科技保障老年人安全;又是論據：現代設施解決後顧之憂。而auto-alarming bell和possible gas—release or theft等詞提供了具體例證。同時，作者語言地道，"most concerned issues，life span，selected audiences，exposed to"等表達十分準確老練。如果沒有在學習中的透徹掌握和平時的大量閱讀，是很難做到辭彙如此運用自如的。
(點評教師：辛紅葉)