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試題回放1:假定你是李華,正在英國接受英語培訓,住在一戶英國人家裏。今天你的房東Mrs. Wilson不在家,你準備外出,請給Mrs. Wilson寫一留言條,內容包括:

1.外出購物

2.替房東還書

3.Tracy來電話留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)見面取消;2)此事已告知Susan;

3)盡快回電

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Yours,

Li Hua

本文屬于提綱式要點作文,是學生比較熟悉的題材,體現了英語學習應該註意實用性,生活型的原則。行文人稱、時態運用恰當、準確,各個要點間邏輯連貫,行文通順。提綱類書面表達不是簡單的逐條翻譯,而是將所給的幾個要點合理的組成比較通順的語句,因此要仔細組織語言,合理安排結構。在語言方面,特別註意簡潔明了,開頭開門見山。

試題回放2:

假如你是李華,美國一所友好學校準備與你們學校共同創辦一份中學生英文刊物,該校格林先生來信詢問有關情況。請你給她寫封回信,主要內容如下:

1、表示贊成。

2、提出你喜歡的欄目。

3、簡要說明理由。

註意:

1.詞數100左右;2.新的開頭和結尾已為你寫好;3.適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;4.參考欄目:欄目—column

Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

這是一篇滿分作文。仔細分析了這篇文章,寫的的確是好,很地道的美式英語,一些詞語的大膽使用,讓人不得不猜測此人或者是家人可能有過國外生活的經歷,否則這麽地道標準的英語,可不是一朝一夕所能寫出來的。

比如說:my cup of tea, apart from that, oralEnglish, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大膽運用,list, can't wait to簡直是perfect!況且文章中沒有一個錯誤,不管是書寫還是文法。英語能夠學到這種程度,不可謂不讓人佩服。

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